Propaganda for WWI
Today we made a propaganda for them to
enter the war trying to incite them to go
This project I do with my partner
Jorge her are images of the propaganda’s
Of WWI
The thing in the woods
We Read a book the name of the book is the things in the wood . We tell to miss dai the story with Martina , Ramiro , coni and my , we do a trailer . now I am going to show the trailer
Boys, very good work but there are some issues.
ResponderEliminarFirst, it's not "came" but "come". Came is the past simple of come.
Second, the word "nationalist" is very negative. A better choice would have been "patriot".
And finally, avoid the use of "please" because the idea is that people should be proud to be part of the army and not to feel as though they were doing them a favour by joining. The same with the "if you can".
Mark: 8, 50 (eight fifty)